Firstly, you’ve treated all women as a homogenous group with a very specific idea of what they want. You don’t speak for all women — perhaps some women were happy with things the way they were. Perhaps not. You don’t get to make that judgement on an ideological basis on behalf of all women.

Secondly, ‘some women lie about rape’ suggests a binary. Women either lie or they don’t — the world is more complicated about that. Conflating this very complex issue into something painfully simple is negligent at best and harmful at worst. Women do lie about rape (a tiny minority) — your statement can be used by men to argue to throw out all valid claims — baby with the bathwater. It also throws out the direct assertion ‘believe all women’ — which is one of the main stumbling points of the #MeToo movement. In reality, the interplay and interpersonal communication between the sexes is far more complicated and nuanced on an individual level than you’re suggesting.

Thirdly, and perhaps most insidiously, despite being written to appeal to a core base of hardline supporters, it does little to address the systemic inequality prevalent in the system. You haven’t attempted to analyse the underlying structures of mating behaviour, biological, socially constructed or otherwise. You’re presenting a world where women continue to be oppressed, men continue to be evil and/or stupid and you get paid for pointing out.

Provide a solution that isn’t just ‘all men are awful’. Society’s patience is rapidly wearing out.