I would say a good indication you’re writing into an echo chamber is when Human Revolution shows up with gushing applause. I don’t think there’s anything particularly wrong with what you’ve written, rather the whole thing is a giant Kafka trap designed to reduce any rebuttal into ‘you are also part of the problem’ - I’m contractually obliged to point these out when I see them.

So yeah, sure…. The great nebulous patriarchy is the enemy of progress. Some men will kick back at this, most people in your bubble will give a standing ovation - that’s it. If you wanted applause from me, you’d have written how feminism of this nature and tone upholds and cements patriarchy by further entrenching existing positions - men feel patronised, women feel empowered - and everyone stays in their lane.